Thought This Sweet

[SweetAterPie]

I lie on the ground and stare into space, the stars start to move into the shape of your face.

I see you there now looking down at me, with that cute little smile, that I so like to see.

You say "close your eyes and what do you see", I see only two people, just you and me.

Were walking the shoreline with our feet getting wet, the horizon turns pink as the sun starts to set.

We make love through the night, on that white sandy shore, then I hold you while thinking I could want nothing more.

Oh I wish I could be in that one special place, as I lie on the ground and I stare into space.

[Mr No Confidence]

Great stuff, I like how it painted the scene with its words.

Is this yours? Do you write a lot?

I just started on a some new stuff yesterday myself. It's some crazy stuff, I wasn't in my right mind when I wrote the rough draft. It's a self-love, suicide, schizophrenic ballad set in a bathroom; I'm basically looking at a bathroom mirror threatening myself. Crazy stuff, but I have to finish it. I write all kinds of crazy poems and short stories, like shit about my dirty refrigerator and insercure drug dealers I know. Shit I can't post here, haha.

Anyway, thanks for sharing that.

[SweetAterPie]

I,m a novice want a be, I just stumbled across this while reading thought it had a nice flow. Its titled A Wish.