Asian Invasion In My Inbox

[simplegent]

Originally Posted by Dorthy_Monroe

They love specials thats the only time they contact me... 5 dollah love Dorthy long long time

OMG - TFF

[Adabear]

Dorthy,

I would love to help answer your question

Originally Posted by Dorthy_Monroe

You werent thinking this when you wanted an appointment to get einstien.. Your mad because I declined to see you get over it no need to be ugly... What makes me uneducated since your so smart

Things that can make you look uneducated in this post...

1. Einstein should always be capitalized as it is a name of a person.
2. "your" should be you are or you're in this and most of your posts.
3. Asians = group of people from Asia. Asian's is a posessive of that word but, should be followed by what they posses. Such as, I sat at the Asian's table.
4. Generally, capitalization in a sentance should be limited to the first word and any proper nouns (there are exceptions but, it would be a good starting point).
5. Use a comma to set off introd uctory elements, as in "Running toward third base, he suddenly realized how stupid he looked." or Use a comma to separate the elements in a series (three or more things), including the last two.
6. When using a contraction (Such as don't), you should make sure to include the apostrophe. It is located to the left of the enter key on most keyboards.
7. When listing numbers, you generally spell them out unless there over over ten or you are using them as away to make a list. Ex. 1 2 3 4 5 should be first, second, third, fourth or fifth, based on one of your ealier posts.
8. If you have two independent clauses, they should be either separate sentences or they should have a semicolon between them.
9. When you wrote that you have know clue, I believe you meant "no" clue. know = to be aware AND no = to have none
10. When you said " a high five to there face", I believe you meant "their" face. there = a location AND their = belonging to or associated with the people or things previously mentioned or easily identified.

If you would like further assistance, I can go through all the posts you made but, I believe you get the point. I am taking the time to respond because it sounded like you really wanted to know how you could improve. I also believe that these mistakes do not make you stupid. It is possible that you are just ignorant on the proper usage of the English language.

I hope you have a great day.

BTW - It is not racist to say that someone smells like soy sauce do to the foods that they eat. It is racist to say they all smell like soy sauce. Also, waiting seven hours to post you were kidding, after someone calls you out on it, looks like you were simply trying to save face.

[Don T. Lukbak]

Originally Posted by Adabear

Dorthy,

I would love to help answer your question



Things that can make you look uneducated in this post...

1. Einstein should always be capitalized as it is a name of a person.
2. "your" should be you are or you're in this and most of your posts.
3. Asians = group of people from Asia. Asian's is a posessive of that word but, should be followed by what they posses. Such as, I sat at the Asian's table.
4. Generally, capitalization in a sentance should be limited to the first word and any proper nouns (there are exceptions but, it would be a good starting point).
5. Use a comma to set off introd uctory elements, as in "Running toward third base, he suddenly realized how stupid he looked." or Use a comma to separate the elements in a series (three or more things), including the last two.
6. When using a contraction (Such as don't), you should make sure to include the apostrophe. It is located to the left of the enter key on most keyboards.
7. When listing numbers, you generally spell them out unless there over over ten or you are using them as away to make a list. Ex. 1 2 3 4 5 should be first, second, third, fourth or fifth, based on one of your ealier posts.
8. If you have two independent clauses, they should be either separate sentences or they should have a semicolon between them.
9. When you wrote that you have know clue, I believe you meant "no" clue. know = to be aware AND no = to have none
10. When you said " a high five to there face", I believe you meant "their" face. there = a location AND their = belonging to or associated with the people or things previously mentioned or easily identified.

If you would like further assistance, I can go through all the posts you made but, I believe you get the point. I am taking the time to respond because it sounded like you really wanted to know how you could improve. I also believe that these mistakes do not make you stupid. It is possible that you are just ignorant on the proper usage of the English language.

I hope you have a great day.

BTW - It is not racist to say that someone smells like soy sauce do to the foods that they eat. It is racist to say they all smell like soy sauce. Also, waiting seven hours to post you were kidding, after someone calls you out on it, looks like you were simply trying to save face.

There are probably at least 500 million old women on this planet with less hen in them than CareBear seems to possess.

Hey, Bubula! Lay off the Strunk & White. The mission of this thread is to find out what funny Asian story is behind old girl's policy.

At least it should be.

[chicagoboy]

Originally Posted by Adabear

Things that can make you look uneducated in this post...

BTW - It is not racist to say that someone smells like soy sauce do to the foods that they eat.

Originally Posted by Adabear

I also believe that these mistakes do not make you stupid. It is possible that you are just ignorant on the proper usage of the English language.

[Adabear]

Thank you chicagoboy

You are correct. Maybe I should substitute "due". Guess I should have reread before posting.

[Don T. Lukbak]

Originally Posted by Adabear

Thank you chicagoboy

You are correct. Maybe I should substitute "due". Guess I should have reread before posting.

Certainly you didn't fail to notice the grammatical number in the sentence being discussed is awry?
(the clue is blue)

[Chung Tran]

this thread needs some refreshment..

I suggest a change in title to "Mental Orientals invading my inbox"

[essence]

Take care not to confuse 'due to' and 'owing to'.

Due to is adjectival and owing to is adverbial.

So, because 'smells' is a verb, the correct grammar would be:

smells like soy sauce owing to

whereas

the man's smell was due to

But more relevantly, 'to the left of the enter key' is as useful as 'east of Calais', seeing as most keys are to the left of the enter key.

Have I killed this ridiculous thread off yet?

[Adabear]

I did, just did not want to redo the whole sentence. singular/plural issue. I will change to people smell. That would work, correct?

Originally Posted by Don T. Lukbak

Certainly you didn't fail to notice the grammatical number in the sentence being discussed is awry?
(the clue is blue)

[Guest021217]

Originally Posted by Adabear

Dorthy,

I would love to help answer your question



Things that can make you look uneducated in this post...

1. Einstein should always be capitalized as it is a name of a person.
2. "your" should be you are or you're in this and most of your posts.
3. Asians = group of people from Asia. Asian's is a posessive of that word but, should be followed by what they posses. Such as, I sat at the Asian's table.
4. Generally, capitalization in a sentance should be limited to the first word and any proper nouns (there are exceptions but, it would be a good starting point).
5. Use a comma to set off introd uctory elements, as in "Running toward third base, he suddenly realized how stupid he looked." or Use a comma to separate the elements in a series (three or more things), including the last two.
6. When using a contraction (Such as don't), you should make sure to include the apostrophe. It is located to the left of the enter key on most keyboards.
7. When listing numbers, you generally spell them out unless there over over ten or you are using them as away to make a list. Ex. 1 2 3 4 5 should be first, second, third, fourth or fifth, based on one of your ealier posts.
8. If you have two independent clauses, they should be either separate sentences or they should have a semicolon between them.
9. When you wrote that you have know clue, I believe you meant "no" clue. know = to be aware AND no = to have none
10. When you said " a high five to there face", I believe you meant "their" face. there = a location AND their = belonging to or associated with the people or things previously mentioned or easily identified.

If you would like further assistance, I can go through all the posts you made but, I believe you get the point. I am taking the time to respond because it sounded like you really wanted to know how you could improve. I also believe that these mistakes do not make you stupid. It is possible that you are just ignorant on the proper usage of the English language.

I hope you have a great day.

BTW - It is not racist to say that someone smells like soy sauce do to the foods that they eat. It is racist to say they all smell like soy sauce. Also, waiting seven hours to post you were kidding, after someone calls you out on it, looks like you were simply trying to save face.

No one asked you cry baby

I cant spell nor use correct puncuation and guess what I dont give a shit and one last thing I DIDNT ASK YOU....I hate grammer police Im Not A HDH So Who cares if i cant freaking spell... Everyone was having fun till you came along no one cares remember your why cant everyone get along thread well it because of people like you... I went to school for welding not english... I purposly took a trade to skip all those classes...

[Guest021217]

Yes i was to lazy to crop it to

[JohnnyYanks]

Originally Posted by Dorthy_Monroe

... I dont give a shit

How unfortunate.

I enjoyed your thoughtful post, Adabear. But perhaps it felt more like a shaming than a tutorial to the young lady?

[Guest021217]

Im done responding to my post thanks for all the laughs but people are going to start being ugly and I dont want to partake in the bs

[Alyssa XOXO]

Originally Posted by Adabear

Dorthy,

I would love to help answer your question



Things that can make you look uneducated in this post...

1. Einstein should always be capitalized as it is a name of a person.
2. "your" should be you are or you're in this and most of your posts.
3. Asians = group of people from Asia. Asian's is a posessive of that word but, should be followed by what they posses. Such as, I sat at the Asian's table.
4. Generally, capitalization in a sentance should be limited to the first word and any proper nouns (there are exceptions but, it would be a good starting point).
5. Use a comma to set off introd uctory elements, as in "Running toward third base, he suddenly realized how stupid he looked." or Use a comma to separate the elements in a series (three or more things), including the last two.
6. When using a contraction (Such as don't), you should make sure to include the apostrophe. It is located to the left of the enter key on most keyboards.
7. When listing numbers, you generally spell them out unless there over over ten or you are using them as away to make a list. Ex. 1 2 3 4 5 should be first, second, third, fourth or fifth, based on one of your ealier posts.
8. If you have two independent clauses, they should be either separate sentences or they should have a semicolon between them.
9. When you wrote that you have know clue, I believe you meant "no" clue. know = to be aware AND no = to have none
10. When you said " a high five to there face", I believe you meant "their" face. there = a location AND their = belonging to or associated with the people or things previously mentioned or easily identified.

If you would like further assistance, I can go through all the posts you made but, I believe you get the point. I am taking the time to respond because it sounded like you really wanted to know how you could improve. I also believe that these mistakes do not make you stupid. It is possible that you are just ignorant on the proper usage of the English language.

I hope you have a great day.

BTW - It is not racist to say that someone smells like soy sauce do to the foods that they eat. It is racist to say they all smell like soy sauce. Also, waiting seven hours to post you were kidding, after someone calls you out on it, looks like you were simply trying to save face.

It's great to know that it's not just my own damn head having to mentally correct every other word when I'm reading through some threads, especially in the Alerts Section (Beaumont Alerts for starters). There hasn't been anything good to read in Coed for months now, unless it's a "premeditated threAD". Of course I read everything on this board on a daily basis due to actual information that it MAY begin to contain again

Anyways, carry on...

[LexusLover]

Originally Posted by Adabear

3. .... Asian's is a posessive of that word but, ....

7. ... based on one of your ealier posts. ...........

I understand. "Things that can make you look uneducated in this post..."