so many robbery alerts put an idea for a story in my head

[johnny punk guy]

First I felt bad then I started drinking. I then see an alert and it tickles the shit out of me. Now don't get me wrong alerts are serious I know this. But I'm just thinking if only I could be the one to run this couple out of the robbing hobbyist business. So I wake up and now I've fully thought out a scenario. Four guys show up to a site knowing they will get robbed.one guy goes in calmly announced I know what's going to happen here. If I don't call the three guys outside in three minutes they will come in. Makes it known that they will be watching and if anyone gets robbed they will return in force. Slowly the guy gets up and leaves. Wouldn't this be a great opening scene for film. Or start to a short story.

Thanks

Johnny

[johnny punk guy]

Copyright pending

[fun2come]

Could be a short, 1st guy gets killed in opening scenes the other 3 laugh their asses off as they never liked that drunk bastard in the first place (more booze for them).
You can use that, no copyright here.

[johnny punk guy]

I guess there could be two films like the prequel to the exorsist