I'm not quite to page 100 but I can certainly discuss Melissa. Right now, I'm still not getting the base emotion of her character. She does seem just a little spoiled.
Her current addictions that I'm reading about run pretty much what I know of how an addict would act. I AM enjoying some of the "scenes" that she describes so far. And learned a few things. Hadn't thought of bending a man's legs up so when he orgasms, he can shoot in his own mouth.
I do wonder how feasible that is for most guys to do, though?
So far, the descriptions are well done. What else?
I'm not getting into plot development much, yet.
I'm finding it, also, hard to stay interested in the story but that could just be my mood yesterday.
Still, so far it's well written and uses good vocabulary. Anyone else?
Elisabeth
P.S. Thanks altcomedy for your input!!! Why don't you stay around for awhile?