Writer In Fayetteville

[Tellsoftly]

That was it. Rough draft, no editing. I don't want to destroy narrative flow, so I'll have to edit carefully and sparingly, but at least one rewrite is needed.

[Lily Blair]

Did you just say that you're also 21?

[Tellsoftly]

Yes, I am 21.

[Revive]

And he knows enough to talk down to everyone on this board lol.

[Tellsoftly]

Originally Posted by Revive

And he knows enough to talk down to everyone on this board lol.

Yes Revive, I'm certainly talking down to you. That is clearly what I am doing, and my words to the contrary and any other interpretations are all invalid. You got me.

[urhuckleberry]

21.... and persistent.

Prologue infers a "Logue" which remains in doubt at this juncture...

Still, good luck with your pursuits.

Huck

[Tellsoftly]

Thanks Huck, and yep. We'll see how long it takes me to make headway.

[Revive]

Yes revive, I'm a sarcastic punk that likes to hear myself talk. Didn't I tell you I can analyze and dissect everything you are saying to discover the size of your penis?

Originally Posted by Tellsoftly

Nonetheless, I find everyone's cynicism refreshing and humanizing.

Oh my gosh dude! Grow your pair already ... Get laid ... Then try to write a book.

[Tellsoftly]

Originally Posted by Revive

Yes revive, I'm a sarcastic punk that likes to hear myself talk. Didn't I tell you I can analyze and dissect everything you are saying to discover the size of your penis?



Oh my gosh dude! Grow your pair already ... Get laid ... Then try to write a book.

I like you, do you know why? It's a common tactic of mine when I'm breaking ice somewhere to pick a fight with the most belligerent and least reasonable person present. You're like a kind of living strawman that I don't have to manufacture.

[Lily Blair]

Originally Posted by Revive

Oh my gosh dude! Grow your pair already ... Get laid ... Then try to write a book.

That's actually probably the best advice you've been given. Spend the money, have the experience, write your own book.

[urhuckleberry]

Originally Posted by Lily Blair

That's actually probably the best advice you've been given. Spend the money, have the experience, write your own book.

Well said, from probably the smartest person on this board.

So let it be written, so let it be done.

Huck

[Tellsoftly]

@Lily

Such a thing would be short, very limited in scope, and likely make for a rather poor novel. Not at all what I'm aiming for. I"m still optimistic though. Plus writers make peanuts to begin with, so that would be sloooooooow going.

@Huck

Maybe, if there is no other way.

[Revive]

And your not talking down to me? Look who is the dumbass

[Lily Blair]

Originally Posted by Tellsoftly

@Lily

Such a thing would be short, very limited in scope, and likely make for a rather poor novel. Not at all what I'm aiming for. I"m still optimistic though. Plus writers make peanuts to begin with, so that would be sloooooooow going.

@Huck

Maybe, if there is no other way.

Maybe put this idea on the back burner. Go to/finish college, maybe grad school.

[Revive]

I like the short part!