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Originally Posted by Cameron Houston
1. What is it you look for in a headline?
2. What in the ladys post, is the deciding factor in you booking & keeping an appointment?
3. What do you prefer/enjoy seeing in the pictures a lady posts?
4. What is the #1 thing that will turn you off about a lady?
Just somethings I've been curious about.. I like to know what turns you on..
Xoxo,
Cameron
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The good news is that I think your ad is better than 95% of the ones I see.
1) Your head line was short and succinct and let me know you have photos in the ad. It also did not include a bunch of little hearts and symbols that scream BP cheap whore.
2) You have photos in the ad. We hate to have to keep searching to find out what you look like. Very good call on switching out the grainy ones. You should get rid of those completely.
3) You have rates listed
4) You have contact info & P411 ID
5) You don't have a half page rant of all the things you hate about hobbiest and your rules to counter act them. (Totally understand the necessity for these, but put in a link to a list on your bio page, and most importantly, find a nice way to say them without coming across all bitter)
6) Kudos on the video/pic friendly, a lot of guys like that.
What would I consider changing?
1) It's great that you have a face photo, we need these, but I am really suggesting that you change it to a smiling one. There are so many threads out there were we talk about the importance of you all smiling and having fun in a session. If you can't smile on an ad/bio photo, why would I ever think you are a fun person in a session? A lot of girls try to have a "sexy" face photo, when they just come out looking pensive or pissed.
2) What is a "VIP 225" rate? In today's new era of not mentioning activities and prices, this is very ambiguous. Does this mean that the normal rates are restricted, or god forbid, limited GFE? The idea of paying a lot of money to have restrictions is a huge turnoff. You might not be saying that, but when all I have is an ad to go on, that's going to be my first thought.
3) Dump the disclaimer. Any decent lawyer will tell you those are a waste of advertising space. You wont get arrested for an ad, you'll get arrested because LEO was in the room with you and there was a break down in the don't mention/exchange sex acts and money at the same time rules.
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Originally Posted by Cameron Houston
Well, i took all into consideration & snapped a few pics last night. Guys can be harsh @ times on their opinions of our looks: too skinny, too much of a gut, too thick, shes fat, face issues, bad angles.. So, therefore- i use to be damn near scared to post anything but perfect pics. Im embracing my curves, thick thighs & everything else, lol.. Like someone else mentioned: u can't please everyone! Thank y'all for the replies & staying on topic!
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This must be one of the absolute hardest, but also most critical things that a woman can do when she decides to become an escort. If a lady is even remotely the type to reach for a keyboard because a guy said they were a 5/10, fat, what ever, this isn't the career for them.
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Originally Posted by Cameron Houston
Can you please clarify who this comment was directed @?
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Ok, obviously, he was referring to your reviews. My normal process is to read the last 10 reviews before seeing someone, so I just checked those out also. Now granted, you obviously have a hater who showed up a lot of times to quack his anger. That said, you have enough red flags there from enough different guys that most of us would pass. Also, if it's true that you now have a no review policy, that's an immediate pass as it's basically a confirmation that a provider is a problem in session.
So bottom line, you are way ahead of most ladies on getting guys initial attention, but based on review history, you are probably loosing them there. Now you may not like that assessment or situation, but from the guys perspective, the only defense will be a full page of good reviews. These should be from guys who frequently review, and not a bunch of 2 sentence reviews from nobodies that just scream Mandle. (To say this next part with integrity, obviously I am excluding myself) If you have to, I would pick the guys and offer some painfully deep discounts if you must to get them to do the reviews.
While I have written all of this with good will, its just my .02, so feel free to ignore it.